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5/17/2013 2:07:31 AM
Nato Calubiran Posts: 23
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Story little boy who Who's in love with you Wants to be together Wants to be with you forever.
I like your style I like your smile I like who you are For me you're my star.
As the autumn breezes And all the cold wishes The leaves just keep on falling.
We keep on parting We keep on fleeting The past is far gone.
ELA Would you remember me Little boy blue A little boy who loved you.
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