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4/9/2013 7:37:29 AM

Christina McCullouch
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I see in your heart I see Inside your Soul
I feel the feelings only you can see or know
I feel your pain from deep down inside
And know the hurt and feelings combined
Your an Amazing,Sweetheart this you should know
Don't let anyone take that from deep inside your Soul
The hurt you feel the anguish deep down inside
will only go away if you learn to let go and cry
The release is so great and healing. Refreshing I would say
That your heart will grow warmer and warmer each day
The Love you have inside shows in your outer glow
So let that glow reach deep down to where it needs to go
You are Beautiful on the inside and out dont let anyone
ever make you dought. Take control and let your inner
light glow.. Come on girl let's give them a beautiful show
Don't lighten your glow for anyone you know let it shine
and always abound..
Just know this to me you are one of the most Beautiful Souls
One of the most precious I have ever encountered on this earth
Although our friendship is beginning to bloom in leaps and bounds
I feel in my heart there is plenty of room for it still to grow
You are the most open, welcoming, sweetheart of a girl that I know
It feels like our friendship has been around forever your already in my soul
I Love you more than words could ever express I'll always be here
to help with any and all Stress or obstacles you go through
So know in me a True friend you have found one that promises to
NEVER let you down!!!!
edited by Peachyc76 on 4/9/2013

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