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4/2/2013 2:45:13 AM
Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133
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Lies Lies Lies
In the passengers seat
There's only an arm rest between us
Why does it feel like a big vast sea
Your lies sink like a million fishhooks
You find small innocent victims,
Shred their insides
And leave them for bait
You lies could paint the titanic withstains
You have no meat
Your eyes no soul
If I jump in
Jog for miles and miles
All I'd find is open road
To think I used to be impressed
I wanted to be like you
Your best gift?
Giving me existence another attitude
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