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1/26/2013 4:09:01 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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I hoped I really really hoped By now that you'd pick up the phone Or show up at my door But there's someone you want a littlebit more
Days and nights go by Staying strong is hard but I try Reminders pop up in every day life But still I keep busy and strong, I try
So many moments I've never had I'll never get to experience with dad Basic anatomy connected us at first You ignored all that and rolled me inthe dirt
Downhill I fell and fell and fell You made me cry many times and I yelled Your heads made of brick My hearts made of sticks Your abuse burned my love down You hallowed the insides of this chick
Been ten years now, I've rolled back upthe hill Been a struggle, but life now is prettychill I wont pretend that I don't think ofyou Miss having someone there because I do Honestly I never did feel that youcared That bottle always came first and itwas more than I could bare
Being me is something I learned to do Something that wouldn't have happenedif I stuck with you.
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