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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
12/31/2012 11:04:32 PM

Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133
I see you once a month
You were handed to me by the man upabove
Have the power to fulfill my biggestemotional need
Or turn me into the biggest witch I canbe
Cravings are beyond control
I really should just put some grass onpaper and begin to roll
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