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12/27/2012 2:47:06 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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World is full of witches I'd love to write on them with stitches Would you like to talk about your daddy issues, I got time, lets break out some tissues
You say you want honesty Your reaction while receiving is deceiving
Your say you and your man share manyloving moods Why am I sitting at a bar watching you hit on another dude Yours is at home, if he knew he'dregret Waiting for you in front of your television set
When you come home tossed He'll make you food while you feel lost You know you should give yourself tohim Your denying him the right to get in
You want him to beg for you Just keep doing what you chose Your love soon enough will be dismissed He wont be around to kiss.
Happens with one man, ok Happens with the second man..eh Happens with the third man, yikes Maybe a therapist in your future isn't out of sight edited by svlynn18 on 12/27/2012 edited by svlynn18 on 12/31/2012
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