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11/28/2012 12:36:11 PM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Will the weather stop being bipolar Making my allergies feel like a chronicdisorder! Dizziness, sneezing, did I mentioncongestion All I'm asking is for Mother Nature toshow me some affection
When Puffs is my new best friend I just hope this uneven weather willend I do get enjoyment and peace from rain For about thirty minutes, not all day
Dishes, laundry, cleaning You'll just have to wait Non-important deadlines, I'm going to be late Sinuses aren't willing to negotiate
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