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11/25/2012 8:07:49 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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If you're too tired too eat the meat Grow a backbone and stand on your owntwo feet
Doesnt' happen in a minute Doesn't happen in an hour Works like soaking in marinade Longer it sits, More flavor is added to the taste ofpower
Lips and a voice allow you to speak Ears allow you to hear Eyes allow you to see You'd rather ignore these miraculousgifts While you relax and drink a beer
You wake the next day Disappointed that you've settled for ajob you hate Get dressed, drive to work Life is too short for this..common! Why do you wait?
No wonder you keep yourself so wellgroomed You've got nothing else to offer, youfeel doomed That mentality wont get you down theblock Take a sick day and learn to play withsidewalk chalk
Money isn't the root of all evil It's greedy people that pay to keep from naughty deeds being revealed. edited by svlynn18 on 11/25/2012 edited by svlynn18 on 11/26/2012
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