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11/21/2012 6:36:56 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Like the weather it seems stormy orbright When the sadness arrives I know I'll never have what could have been So many things I'd like to say Wouldn't matter at the end of the day I'll just close my eyes There will always be a dream tucked inbed Daydreams of the special love Will always trickle in my head
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