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11/13/2012 8:10:03 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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You need more grease on your hands to be a man Motivation and self esteem to be a powerful woman How many nails will you gr(POUND)ound To make success a reeeeemarkable soooouuund? How many people will you hug To calm them down and lift away their shoulder shrug How many times will you use manners Seems it makes people feel respected,that's what matters T-r-a-i-n goes by...sparks...sparks They flicker away the dark Fairies of inspiration lift spirits ofthose who except their invitation Sending a positive spell your way Hope floats in clouds Greets a new day N I S I R N U S edited by svlynn18 on 11/13/2012 edited by svlynn18 on 11/13/2012 edited by svlynn18 on 11/13/2012 edited by svlynn18 on 11/14/2012 edited by svlynn18 on 11/14/2012 edited by svlynn18 on 11/14/2012
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