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11/8/2012 11:17:23 PM
Schuyler Johnson Posts: 17
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Fly down the road, rounded stones to my bare feet; at the end a watery feild I would meet. Leaping high, we lunged to the deep; days of youth, the times I tried to reap. Hours whittled by, cares nor worries we had none; chore at hand was to induce fun. Travelled so long to reach that place; felt like rocketing into space. Across state lines, down the interstate; in the back of that old Chevy, only to sit and wait. Toiled each year for that summer trott; New York to Indiana, at times it was quite hot. Fond memories I'll cherrish and hold; pull through the dark, they'll be there till my hands are cold.
-- ...then again, Ive been known to fib ;') http://skykingentertainment.net
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