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10/21/2012 8:45:48 PM
Schuyler Johnson Posts: 17
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Walk the line, straddle the fire; tested through time by desire. Trials and tribulations, I've been the cause; stop and ponder, time to pause. Topped a hill, I've reached a peak; wisdom of lessons learned is what I seek. But one way to grow, theres a leap in my stride; joy of contentment is now where I abide.
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10/28/2012 4:18:40 PM
Darrel Smith Posts: 2
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jspj1971 wrote:
Walk the line, straddle the fire; tested through time by desire. Trials and tribulations, I've been the cause; stop and ponder, time to pause. Topped a hill, I've reached a peak; wisdom of lessons learned is what I seek. But one way to grow, theres a leap in my stride; joy of contentment is now where I abide.
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10/28/2012 4:19:17 PM
Darrel Smith Posts: 2
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