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10/8/2012 9:06:11 AM

Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17
The time has arrived, it has finnaly come;
Set aside my tarrying and boredom.
Has been awhile made in the waiting;
conjuring, toiling and planning.
Spared the hour only to prepare;
biting on nails and pulling out hair.
Whats this you ask?
only a very significant task!
A labor of love and great desire;
the most crucial thought it does require.
Not much time to waste or throw away;
on to that what I must accomplish today.
Here I go, I'm on the road;
Oh no! I've forgotten that chore my mind did behold.

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