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10/6/2012 9:11:07 PM
Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17
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Long day did finally pass;
toiled along vexing its morass.
Arrived back home to rest and retire;
energy and inspirations soon to expire.
Debrief my conceptions and thoughts;
queery my moves and those aught nots.
Lay at ease to stargazes and dreams;
job well done for me it seems.
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...then again, Ive been known to fib ;') http://skykingentertainment.net
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