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10/3/2012 6:17:37 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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I can imagine hundreds of ways, I know it can happen at any time, Dust will take you, part of me will die
When we're together Having a good time, I treasure the moments you're at my side Until eternity begins, I never want to say goodbye edited by svlynn18 on 10/3/2012
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