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9/23/2012 11:17:09 AM
HOLLY MOORE
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My Love
You found me when my heartwas lost,
But now it is nevermore.
Faith is no longer a wordwithout meaning,
And my tears are no longer streaming.
No light nor dark touches myface,
There is air for me tobreathe.
Love is now in my life,
And I have skin upon myskin.
When you pulled me from my wreckage,
I am thankful I let you in.
You always see past thebeast within me,
We never have to beginagain.
My cheeks are dry, my heartalways beats,
And you are the sun thatshines.
Because I promised to alwayslove you ,
And feed you years of joy.
Never will I leave you……
Because I will always be Mrs. Holly Moore.
Mrs. Moore – 2/14/11
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9/28/2012 4:39:44 AM
Lynn Dolly
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Aww..this is so cute! Glad you found love, this made me smile ))
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10/1/2012 9:10:47 AM
Al Beech
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heartwas, wordwithout, myface,tobreathe,myskin, thebeast, beginagain. heartalways, thatshines. alwayslove
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