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4/30/2024 1:31:28 AM Elaine DVC Posts: 4	The Mysteries of Love Love is mysterious in many ways. True Honest Enduring Mysterious love You will never know Sadness in sincere love Transcended with inner glow. Enchanted by true heart’s desire River so deep, love overflowing Inside feeling hard to comprehend Entangles at majestic love Surrender inner self to One’s heart desires and love Forever cherish Love that is true Or genuine Vow; No– End! Poem Form: Acronet Poem This is an acrostic poem with a sonnet and a reverse sonnet. It has 18 lines. The syllable structure is 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9/9/8/7/6/5/4/3/2/1. Rhyme is not required.
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5/1/2024 1:43:49 AM Amanda Payne Posts: 5	Your poem beautifully captures the essence of love with its progression from mystery and depth to surrender and eternity. The use of the acrostic form adds a layer of intricacy and symbolism, reflecting the complexity of the emotions described. The imagery of a deep river overflowing with love and the inner glow of sincere affection creates a vivid and evocative picture. The repetition of words like "true" and "love" reinforces the central theme and imbues the poem with a sense of conviction and sincerity. Overall, it's a heartfelt exploration of the transformative power of genuine love and commitment.
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