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7/31/2012 9:01:07 AM
Luis Martinez-Rivera Posts: 5
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Jubilation! What wonderful ovation, granted- complete isolation.
Vanity's course- remorse!
Fickle style, shallow- while, surrounded by the senile.
Sanity wonder not, life is begot.
Once more towards the door- forever deplore-
This World, hurled-
Once more- World mature.
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