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Blog Posted:8/16/2006 11:24:00 PM

  Years ago,after my mother died,I sat down to look through some of her things.

I ran across a poem my father had written to her when they were young.

She had scribbled a derogatory remark on the back of it.

   I was very surprised at both of those things.

First ,that MY father would ever write a poem,

and secomdly that my mother would treat it so callously.

   Like Mark's dad,my father was not given to openly expressing his emotions.

On the other hand,I thought my mother to be a real lover of the arts.

There in my hand was a profound challenge to my estimation of both parents.

Or maybe not...............

After all she kept that little piece of paper in her cedar chest for over twenty years

and now I know my father better because of that little poem from his heart..

 



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Date: 8/30/2006 9:40:00 AM
Why don't you kick it off? Keith
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Date: 8/17/2006 12:15:00 PM
Such an open and revealing post. I can relate somewhat, being my parents had a very emotionally empty relationship. My father was stoic, except for his usual rant about something insignificant. My mom, on the other hand, was very nurturing and caring. It was sad to see how he neglected her for so many years. I still loved both, but it was such a waste to me.
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Date: 8/17/2006 10:14:00 AM
Just had to stop back by to answer your question the best that I can. You asked about my sister Rose. She is living her life one day at a time.She would not want me to say more. I have to respect her privacy. Thank you for asking about her my friend.Carol
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Date: 8/17/2006 9:13:00 AM
My mother and father had a love hate relationshop for years....I could never understand it.... They were both so firey ...they kindled each others flames...then killed each others flame...both of them left smouldering in the ashes. It was like that until the end. But they truly loved each other.
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Date: 8/17/2006 6:55:00 AM
Maybe they had a disagreement that day. Most married folks do at one time or another.And maybe she really loved it but never took the time to turn it over and scribble out what she had wrote. She had to have loved it or she never would have kept it don't you think? Love, Carol
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