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THE PATH WELL TRAVELLED - POTD

POTD 23 Mar 2024 

THE PATH WELL TRAVELLED.
Two paths diverged, and I was thrown by doubts I had never known To my left, thickly overgrown, was a path to dismal dimness prone. To my right, a lovely sight-fragrant flora flamed in light Forms so graceful, beauty rare, a wonderous vision beyond compare. Both seduced with equal right, torn was I between dark and light. Resisting limits of time and sight, a liminal border of cosmic might. Hesitancy rapt with fear and doubt, the pondering heart beat aloud. Tempting was the path so grand, but instinct cautioned of a treacherous hand. A feathery touch, a breeze stirred, and in its sigh, a voice I heard. Was it Hecate who whispered? "Take heed. Beware, for each path leads to a different lair." Crystal clarity knew what I must do, and with a heart filled with valour true, Joyously, I strode wild and free down the well-trodden path ahead of me. The leaves, like frisking lovers, played as I embarked my chosen way. Future paths ~ So many dreams ~ Each a thread in life's grand scheme. Though true discovery lay in paths, I'd roam ~ The one well travelled always led back Home.
By Maria Williams © Greeks worshipped Hecate as a guardian and gatekeeper who could ward off evil forces. She is often represented carrying a torch and a key and standing on the liminal border between one place and another. She bears three heads and always has a dog by her side. Inspired by Robert Frost's 'The Road Not Taken', I chose to write an alternative version. 'The Road Not Taken' is one of Robert Frost's most famous poems. It's natural and understandable that many readers take the poem to be Frost's statement of individualism as a poet: he will take 'the road less travelled'. The metaphor of the road is one that immediately evokes a journey, not just of the local or day-to-day kind, but of the life-defining sort: life as a journey, with many roads which we must travel along, and with many alternative paths which we must choose between. POTD 23 March 2024

Copyright © Maria Williams | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 4/28/2024 1:16:00 AM

Belated congratulations on the honour of POTD Maria, as we go through life we hope that the path we take is the right one. I've been travelling again playing catch up. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 4/25/2024 10:38:00 AM

I enjoyed this technically rich poem, Maria, and I'm not at all surprised it was honoured with p.o.t.d. award. The path well travelled might be easier to take, but the destination is not always the expected one! After all, it's said that fortune favors the brave, thus sacrifice could yield better results. This also applies to us writers, when to achieve better results, we are expected to think outside the box. ~ Congratulations & Hugs, my friend // paul
Date: 4/24/2024 8:29:00 PM

Maria you have certainly received a host of comments and well deserved. I enjoyed both the read and the audio. Loved the imagery created by your first two stanzas. Wazza I posted a poem today that also deals with life's journey metaphorically.
Date: 4/23/2024 7:55:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD!
Date: 4/23/2024 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, Maria. Truly enjoyed your version of Robert Frost's famous poem - yours is a unique one too!
Date: 4/23/2024 1:50:00 PM

Many Congratulations on the POTD with such a fantastic poem. Well done Maria!
Date: 4/23/2024 1:39:00 PM

Dear Maria, you've created a beautiful version of ' The Road Not Taken, ' and the guardian the Greeks worshiped. I'm not familiar with ' Hecate, ' but she sounds interesting. I'm captivated with your final thought: ' The one well traveled always led back Home. ' Choosing the right path is best. So wonderful seeing your words in the spotlight. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 4/23/2024 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD., Maria... Your poem beautifully captures the universal experience of facing choices and uncertainty in life's journey. The imagery of the diverging paths, one overgrown and ominous, the other adorned with vibrant flora, vividly illustrates the contrast between darkness and light, doubt and clarity. It portrays the inner conflict and hesitation faced when confronted with such pivotal decisions, evoking a sense of tension and introspection.. Nice to see you posting.
Date: 4/23/2024 10:34:00 AM

Way to go, congrats on POTD. I also enjoyed your narration, Hugs Rick.
Date: 4/23/2024 8:20:00 AM

Stunning and quite beauteous POTD, Maria. Grandissimo and Congratulations.Enjoy your special poetry day! :)))
Date: 4/23/2024 8:01:00 AM

A thought-provoking take on "The Road Not Taken" Maria, and nicely worded, "A feathery touch, a breeze stirred, and in its sigh, a voice I heard."
Date: 4/23/2024 7:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/lovely write/story. Great Ending... Have a blessed day writing away..................
Date: 4/23/2024 7:20:00 AM

A wonderful poem Maria, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Date: 4/23/2024 7:07:00 AM

I enjoyed this beautiful poem and gem of inspiration which give an alternative slant on The Road Not Taken. I especially was impressed with the thought of the importance of the journey returning home. I love it. And congratulations on POTD.
Date: 4/23/2024 6:47:00 AM

I think I just heard Mr. Frost whisper...."if only i'd had more time and more paper...brilliant take on The Road Not Taken Maria...could we call it the "Path Of The Day"....
Date: 4/23/2024 6:46:00 AM

A FAV for my collection, well written and a delightful read, my friend. Congratulations on your POTD honor, Maria! Enjoy your special day of recognition! Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
Date: 4/23/2024 6:04:00 AM

Congrats on your great POTD. Hugs xx
Date: 4/23/2024 5:59:00 AM

Good Morning, Maria, I am back to cheer you for getting POTD and so well deserving my poet friend!! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 4/23/2024 5:01:00 AM

Great choice for Potd and a nice read to start my day. So many roads in life. Some have found the need to switch lanes or change roads altogether. Me? I've chosen a course of life that is not full of excitement but feels safe and secure
Date: 4/23/2024 4:55:00 AM

"Future paths ~ So many dreams ~ Each a thread in life's grand scheme"., Great take on that classic poem, Congrats on POTD
Date: 4/23/2024 4:50:00 AM

Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Maria. Enjoy your special day today.
Date: 4/23/2024 3:38:00 AM

returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation for this tender, mindful poem. Enjoy!
Date: 4/23/2024 2:23:00 AM

- To live a good life based on the conditions that life requires and where you cannot 100% decide the direction yourself - Much in this life we can choose, and we have responsibility for things, but something takes shape along the path of life without us being able to do something from or to - Then the choice is difficult - Sometimes there are the good things, but sometimes there are unexpected turns - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Maria :) - A meaningful poem, beautifully written :) - hugs
Date: 4/23/2024 12:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your poignant poem winning potd! Great job writing such a uniquely inspiring and informative piece!
Date: 4/23/2024 12:34:00 AM

How beautiful and profound is this write dear beautiful maria. Nowadays, many take the road most traveled, such as ai, but i admire the ones that take the road less traveled. As i am like a riddle myself! I love your rhymes and also the alliterations flowing so eloquently! You have a graceful way with words, that really would touch any soul! Iv missed reading you and its a pleasure having to read this! Every line in this is sheer beauty! And i love the mythological aspect youv explained! FAVE
Date: 4/22/2024 10:35:00 PM

At some point in our life, we have to make a choice. Two paths, one easy, one difficult. I still hear my favourite preacher, Father Corapi booming with the saying: No pain, no gain. Jesus is our gatekeeper and he leads us to safety. So we have to choose the difficult path. Your poem is a great metaphor for such a choice. Loved the recording and the picture. May we all choose the right path. Hugs xx
Date: 4/22/2024 9:22:00 PM

Hey, Maria, this is a lovely gentle poem and yes I sense the Robert Frost feel. Plenty to enjoy here and meditate on.. the little explanation is insightful too. Very nice indeed. Sam :) x
Date: 4/22/2024 4:08:00 PM

I felt the gentle pull of instinct of the correct path to choose. I enjoyed these lines especially: Tempting was the path so grand, but instinct cautioned of a treacherous hand. I also liked: Though true discovery lay in paths, I'd roam A truly soulful poem and one Frost would've liked :-) enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 4/22/2024 2:09:00 PM

A meaningful life message you convey, Maria, in this potent write on choices in life we face. Not easy to choose the right path, but something within us guides us to our destination. I like your concluding line--one that leads back home is the right path.
Date: 4/22/2024 7:05:00 AM

How lovely! I loved when our Pastor told us of his trip to Israel and how the driver pointed to the hills, “the paths of righteousness,” and our Pastor was like, “say what?” He found out that they call the well worn paths, the paths of righteousness. Your poem reminds me of this and I am also a Frost lover! Fave for me!
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