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Sudden

My good luck charm, my treasure it's what I found. My lover, best friend all wrapped in one another. No other it's clear, I've never been so ready for what's real. Smiley faces, no new faces, heart skips a beat. You make me want to disappear, up up and away, I can't feel my feet! The cloud on the left, that cloud on the right, the moon in the sky, is were I hide my pride. Being this girl I am, it's really hard you see, inside outside I've never been so beat. Beautiful, wonderful is who I am, you make me want to shout and scream, "LOVELY".... is this really me? Don't wake me up, I love the thrill, it's something way more than I can feel. If God is for me than who can be against me, is what I tell the world. You never have to sin again, just let me fulfill. Fulfill your heart with Gods word and all he has for you, it's so much beautiful, magnificent let me take you through. Up the hills and through the valleys far far away, you wouldn't have to experience the pain and heavy chains. Just let go, let go and break free, those chains is super heavy... don't you agree? Trying not to get hurt again is the true meaning of promises, but knowing your past was tragic, I'll never try to attack it. Hard aching pain, unwanted fairly tells, is what I been through. Please help me to understand the true definition of "New". New beginnings, happy endings is what I truly wanted. Learning to open up and love again is simply said than done, I am a soldier through it all, I can feel the army ready to come. So when it's all said and done I've reached my limit and sturdy peek, BOOM .... there goes the storm, I'm super ready for my new journey.

Copyright © Donshanea Atkins | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 9/7/2016 12:53:00 PM

Donshanea rAtkins, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Date: 9/7/2016 10:51:00 AM

Nice to see this Donshanea, I have family in Florida with the same last name ATKINS. :) It's a beautiful world.,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

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