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Life's Perfect Little Mold

I have a secret
A secret I've never told
A secret that might ruin
Life's perfect little mold.

I've hid it for years
Never telling a soul
Afraid of the unseen consequences
Knowing what the truth would hold.

I'd hurt my friends and family
And all those I hold dear
If they were to find out
I'd push away all that was near.

Now the secrets taking over
It's becoming too much to bear
It's slowing destroying my soul
Sometimes, life is so unfair.

I need to get this off my chest
Before I lose control
I can't stop the hurting
I feel it deep in my soul.

I'll never tell my secret
Until the day I die
Not even if it kills me
When asked I'll always lie.

I have a secret
A secret I've never told
Why would I want to ruin
Life's perfect little mold.

Copyright © Brooklyn Nikola | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/15/2016 10:05:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Brooklyn. :)
Date: 6/15/2016 8:58:00 AM

Brooklyn N.,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
Date: 6/15/2016 2:17:00 AM

Brooklyn,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Date: 6/15/2016 12:04:00 AM

The nice tension of suspense held skilfully till the end , no, beyond the end, enjoyed reading ... great ! ...

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