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Just One More Dumpling

Just one more dumpling, and I'll be cool
No don't give up, it's way too soon
Heavy dreariness in the room
I was never ready for this nauseating mood

All I have
All is here
All is well
All is happy
All is great
All is smiles
All is care
All is gratitude

But just one more dumpling made me sick
Sick to the bone
Sick in the heart.

God of gluttony
Forgive me
I know I'm not meant to be this free
But there is something that I really need
So let me, to be happy


But I can't stop
Here comes a lotus petal
Drenched in the honey
I'm going to explode
But I can't stop.
I'm happy 
I have it all
Seeing anything happy for me is gold


Let's just wait 
One more day
To let this feeling go away
This feeling that I would
But wish not that I should
To have that one more bite
Of dumpling out of everyone's sight
But at the end of today
Everyone will go away
And I shall fade out of their minds
So is this why we should seize the day?

The dollar bills
Bills so tight
They mean nothing to me
Let them fly
Across the bridge
Across the room
Across the sunset I see at noon
In the sky,
In which I say, oh my oh my
Here's another one 
Lost in the breeze
I would wheeze
And end with a faint
But delicate, painful sigh.

Copyright © Reenie Luo | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 2/15/2024 4:45:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Date: 6/16/2016 11:58:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Rennie. :)
Date: 6/15/2016 8:21:00 AM

Rennie,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
Date: 6/14/2016 5:21:00 PM

Great list Reenie,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

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