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Every Jack Needs His Jill

Every Jack needs his Jill

When I close my eyes I see you 
Those pretty brown eyes I can see right through
Your beautiful soul 
Is where I live 
To you is where my love is to give.
I said no to sex a time or two
Because I knew all I wanted was really you.
But as you leave 
I think to myself
What could have been and what I left on the shelf.
I will always care for your pretty soul.
I will remember you for a lifetime
I'm your Jack and you're my Jill
To Brooklyn is to where Jill leaves
But Jack cares for Jill more than she sees.
He wonders if she'll ever comeback.
But for Jill there is no time to hold back.
Jill was an angle and Jack loved her soo.
But Jack had no emotions until it was time for Jill to go.
Every night Jack would go to the Brooklyn Bridge.
In hopes that Jill would show up beyond the ridge.
One night as Jack sat on the rocks 
The east river was flowing as fast as a fox. 
Jack reminisced on his times back with Jill 
And then Jack realized  Jill on top of the hill. 
As Jack looked in awe of the sight 
Of Jills pretty face Jack filled with delight.
She came down and said sorry Jack but your not for me 
I've lost all my feelings, I've met a guy, Pete.
Jack was disappointed that his love of his life. 
Could just pick up and move on like all was alright.
The wind and the rain poured from the dark Brooklyn sky 
As Jack began to cry.
He cared for her and loved her, but she didn't feel the same. 
But she played along and eventually she won the game. 
The light brightens my day when I'm feeling alone.
Brooklyn at night is a piece of 
And will always have a special place
Right next to Jill the girl who stole the key to my heart.

Christopher Lutzen
11/09/15

Copyright © Christopher Lutzen | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 11/11/2015 9:57:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Christopher! Love, Kim
Date: 11/10/2015 12:07:00 PM

Christopher, Congrats on your favorite poem win, Love SKAT
Date: 11/10/2015 8:29:00 AM

Hi Christopher, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Date: 11/10/2015 12:40:00 AM

lovely....
Date: 11/9/2015 7:24:00 PM

Chris this is a masterpiece this is Excellent my friend--That's a 7 +++ please do check my out tell me what you think
Date: 11/9/2015 8:21:00 AM

Christopher Lutzen,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

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