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Romance Was Not Our Muse

Romance was not our muse, he types
Not writes his farewells before each morning -
A simple 'Till tomorrow' left by cooling sheets.

We started as lovers, before we were friends
Speaking in touches instead of thoughts
Every night he clouded our secrecy
With cigarette smoke, an ashtray beneath my bed, 
A counter of the days we were spent.

But a playful joke turned bittersweet, I slipped
My favourite glinting stud, a gift
In his pocket lining, finding instead a reminder
Of sin and silent lives, a ticket 
To home and back to reality.

In dawn’s light and an empty bed, I wrapped 
Bruised red lips around his fading cig, enjoying
The lingering taste of him and his ashy breath.

Romance was not our muse, I type
Not write my farewells before the morning -
A simple 'Good-bye' left by cooling sheets.

Copyright © Whirl Wind | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 12/30/2014 4:24:00 PM

I agree with Richard L, this is a reelly moody poem wel worth a second read. Loo forward to more of your work. God Bless .D.
Date: 12/29/2014 9:42:00 AM

I love the mood of this piece, congratulations. I wrote one called Slump for the contest, you might enjoy it.
Date: 12/26/2014 11:00:00 PM

Ashley, congratulations in Craigs C., chopped contest.... LUV LINDA
Date: 12/22/2014 9:02:00 PM

Wonderful write Ashley! Congrats on big win!
Date: 12/22/2014 1:58:00 PM

Wonderful win..Congrats..Sara
Date: 12/21/2014 10:04:00 PM

Loved this poem, Congratulations on your well deserved win with this excellent write.
Date: 12/21/2014 4:01:00 PM

So well written...big congrats on your win
Date: 12/21/2014 3:42:00 PM

beautifully penned - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/21/2014 12:11:00 PM

Congrats Ashley. I liked how this was framed by the first and last stanzas.
Date: 12/17/2014 11:58:00 AM

Beautiful and welcome to Poetry Soup..
Date: 12/12/2014 3:50:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL!! Please share more. your writing is very good..~Joel

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