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The First Love

When I first saw love, she wore a diamond necklace. When I first saw love I thought it was true. As love got stronger, she was harder to control, harder to keep her, harder to feel her. “Love” I called. “Love, what are you doing!” I said. But what was weird is that I knew what love was doing. Love, my dear love was sitting, staring, shaking, in pain they called it. She trembled at the sound of my voice, and love was no longer there for me, love failed me. We all know I failed love though. No! “I didn't fail her” I screamed. Love looking at her failed me, love looking at me like the world is going to end. That end though is a new beginning for me. I don’t need to bleed, I just need to succeed. I knew your little game love, your silly, stupid, mental game you were playing. She turned as I said “I won!” I knew this war was over, a war I won on my own. So this I knew that love waived that white flag and I knew I won. So goodbye love, this is over, your lost darling, your lost dear, your lost love.

Copyright © Dakota Cook | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/6/2016 9:11:00 AM

DAKITA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
Date: 4/24/2016 9:29:00 AM

Dakota Cook, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
Date: 10/12/2014 12:08:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dakota- I choose your first very well written poem - Lovely and moving - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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