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Monster

Dumb myself 
Down
Ugly
Stupid
Could you still love me
I know 
So stupid
Knowing everything 
Could you still love me
Will you please take me 
I will be better 
I promise 
My hair will grow 
Far and long 
I will be strong again 
If you promise to love me
As a monster 
I will be a monster no more
I will be the mother 
Of your child 
I promise to teach her 
How to be 
Everything that I was not

Copyright © Trieu Phan | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 4/1/2014 10:24:00 PM

Hi Trieu, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Date: 3/31/2014 3:50:00 PM

Trieu,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Date: 3/31/2014 1:05:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Trieu :) - I choose your first well written "Monster" poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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