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A NEED TO FEEL

The feeling is dwelling from within
a desire to cut starts to begin

I reach out for the innocent blade 
needing to feel something again 

As the blade starts to penetrate my skin 
I can feel the relief from deep within

I lay so peaceful I long for this feeling to stay
Lost in this world unable to make another day 

But the blood begins flowing to fast this time 
Its release renders me powerless to fight 

My body starts to grow cold and dim 
I penetrated a little to deep into my skin 

Unable to move, I'm restricted to lay here to die 
This body left lifeless, as my soul takes to the sky 



Copyright © Denise Hopkins | Year Posted 2016

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  1. Date: 4/3/2016 6:06:00 AM

    Ok , not a bad outpouring, some unusual phrasing, that could be harshened up for effect, a little bit too much personalisation, that negates the effect of the darkness, 3rd couplet line one , repeated the word " to" ... now you know you got read ....
  1. Date: 4/3/2016 6:01:00 AM

    A deep and emotional poem... A little dark.. I hope it is fictional..

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