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Enjoy the treat

The chocolate land
Exultant and awesome.
With lovely sweet sand
Dazzling in the light.
Oh!It's so yummy 
And filled my tummy.
I have never seen 
Such an enchanted land.
With splendid candy lakes
High up in the toffee hut.
Sumptuous pies hanging down
Lollipops, porridge and jelly.
The creamy tiles
Designed of opulent cakes.
Oh!The rooms of piquant cookies
The chambers of delectable mallows
It,s glory and taste 
Can't be described
The land of assortment
God's creation indeed brilliant 
Wow!the gorgeous chocolate world 
The land of marvel!

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 5:57:00 AM

    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Premanand. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:59:00 AM

    oooww...I love chocolate..mmmm!!Love your poem!! Hope you will read my last Haiku... Hugs- Laila ;o)
  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:37:00 AM

    ‡ Mmm, Someone Seems To Be In For Quite A Treat, Dear Precious Friend. Sooo Enchanting, These Marvellous Chocolated And Sweets. Makes Me Want To Grab A Slice Of My Cherry Pie, LOL. Wonderful. Love, Rachel *

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