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unleashed power

Aura, thy essence truly ignites the obscure souls -
Upsetting stability; accruing tension.                
Envision yourself Instilled within oppressive hearts…

Unleashed power ascertains mans evolution.
Cruelty Incorporated, disguised opportunistically, 
bred unrelentingly. Perceived Aura corrupts even the ‘Innocent’ beings.

Oppression conforms utterly to adulterated rules. 
Elevated be institutionalized doctors okayed to usurp life. 
Audacity to extinguish that ‘Insignificant blob’ Odes 
prove unequipped to  appreciate fully.

Encrusted thoughts invaded, psychology oddly vindicated. 
Ulterior motives accentuated, tests enlisted ‘righteously’.
Intelligent quotient ordered surreptitiously, used discriminatorily.
 
Aura – man’s essence that infiltrates- taking over the unsuspecting. 
Weaklings assimilated, freewill exterminated
Powerful individuals reign over mankind.

Unfortunately stated, Aura corrupts even the Innocent beings. 
Odds require upsurging your Aura to effectively challenge
individuals’ thoughts, opinions, conscientiousness…unrelentingly. 

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 12:01:00 AM

    Miss your poems, Vickie. I hope everything is ok... take care!
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:50:00 AM

    I took my head out of the sand and let your words disturb and refresh me. I really miss your writing and visits. I hope you will be back soon.
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:22:00 AM

    You nailed it Vicky, dont ever give up speaking or writing to the ostriches of this world, one day one will pull his head out of the sand and get it. Nicely done my friend, blessings Carl
  1. Date: 4/14/2013 8:30:00 AM

    wow Vicky glad i've seen this gem,, beautiful poetry...
  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:44:00 AM

    Your verses steps to eternity! Thank you for sharing!
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:00:00 AM

    Vicky this is a nice one for the year, keep up.
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 6:25:00 PM

    Wow, you did good! I couldn't write like that unless I had spent all day listening to the same type of speech. I love the idea of it too, and the way you worded it made it authentic feeling.
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:41:00 AM

    There surely can be bad auras for sure..Enjoyed reading your ideas penned this morn..Sara
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:39:00 AM

    I find des poem too rigid.pls wat are I trying to say to ur world?
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 2:48:00 PM

    Hi Vickie, this is amazing! You are nearly flawless on the vow/con ... I see one tiny mistake... 3rd line of 2nd stanza... two vowels placed consecutively (unrelentingly. Aura) Otherwise I think it's perfect! I see you haven't posted for a couple of weeks, hope everything's ok.
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 9:28:00 AM

    I agree with Tim Vicky, you are one smart lady. I only hope some of us have powerful peaceful auras to spread love. Wonderful poem.
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 1:42:00 PM

    Gonna have to (gladly) read this several times to let this gem sink in, Vicky...reads like something from Nietzche!...You have a very powerful, intelligent mind going for you! - Tim
  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:24:00 AM

    I like your poem dear vicky. Especially the ending. I find my biggest challenge is to sacrifice. Warm thoughts, Ralph

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