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At Heaven's Gate - Part 3

Part 3:          AT HEAVEN’S GATES

To set Her free from destiny was far from my design,
but, though unplanned, I touched Her hand, to give Her peace of mind.
She told me then, and then again, that providence Divine
had cast a curse, and even worse: despised by all mankind,
She walked alone, unseen, unknown, along an empty line.

To break this spell of living hell, of loneliness enshrined,
and end Her days within the haze, She said one final deed
would give reprieve and maybe leave our destinies entwined.
Her final quest be put to rest if only I agreed,
but no surcease nor perfect peace nor hope if I declined.

The shadows crawled and silence mauled the night Her fate was sealed
while towers peered or disappeared beyond the floating fog.
The skyline cracked and starlight slacked and chimes of children pealed
and in the hills where midnight chills, there bayed a dying dog.
Without delay I showed the way, the path to Potter’s Field.

Her weathered face was lined with Grace, Her eyes shone emerald green.
With me as guide she stepped inside to grieve and mourn Her loss,
and thereupon, though pale and wan, the night took on a sheen.
With weary eyes as Her disguise, She placed a wooden cross
upon a mound, unhallowed ground, and whispered ‘Sibylline...’.

A falling star flashed from afar and burst in bolide flame.
Beneath the light, the final rite no longer hid undone.
And kneeling there in silent prayer, we seemed to share the shame
but could atone if left alone, forevermore as one.
Before we both could speak an oath, I asked Her for Her name.

Through lips, pale red, She simply said ‘They called me Abigail’.
Beneath a birch where white doves perch, I took Her for my bride,
beheld Her smile a little while, but all to no avail...
A rumpled shape, Her cloak and cape, lie empty at my side...
For now She waits at Heaven’s Gates, not far beyond the Pale.


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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 5:13:00 PM

    :.. ‡ Abigail, I Love This Beautiful Name, Sweet Beautiful Terry! ˜ I Also Love The Ending And As She Waits At Heavens Gates ˜ Perhaps One Day I Shall Find Her There ? Smile Into Her Eyes Holy Angels By Our Side, Saying, 'Welcome Home.' ˜ Another Favourite In Both Fascination As Creativity; 'Bravo, Bravo' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:35:00 AM

    the grace of this piece treads on the path of foreve, reaching to both ends of the universe.... beautifully penned!..:) huggs
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 12:11:00 PM

    awesome write, Terry. Have just read parts 1, 2 & 3 engrossed throughout. Thanks for your comment at Whispers -will check back to see if you've posted there yet
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:00:00 AM

    you could write a whole novel Terry..you are that good..hats off to you for this fine write.
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:30:00 AM

    Poetry extraordinaire! From a 'simple' physicist you have delved into the heart of it all. bravo! again.
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:23:00 AM

    Dear Terry You are skilled beyond comment. Your sense of perfect rhyme and story telling is superb. My gosh have you been doing this in lieu of reading my silly poetry book? Good good good. "Bolide flame" Only you and your talent to teach another term 'at heaven's door.' I will read this again and again for the gems I have missed in sheer anticipation of the next one. This may be my favorite yet. Thy 'think' not too much. love, Kathy

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