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Lips Touch

When we wake at dawn
Languidly and Longingly

When we part for a time
Avidly and Ardently

When we make love
Passionately and Powerfully

When we fight and Make-up
Vehemently and Vigorously

When we lay in the dark
Sedately and Serenely

We move through the day
To come alive
When our lips touch


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  1. Date: 1/31/2012 11:01:00 PM

    AWESOME last couplet there and I enjoyed the alliteration throughout.
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:13:00 PM

    Another romance poet hits the scene!! Fun one. Very intense. Gwendolen
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 10:09:00 AM

    Michele, like this, secreting Alliteration..David
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 10:08:00 AM

    Hi, Michele. Welcome to Poetry Soup. You have only posted a few poems, and they are amazing! In this poem, you express your feelings with tenderness by showing your romantic side. I wish success in your writing endeavors. Have a wonderful day. Peace and Love, Andrew.
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 9:52:00 AM

    Ps. Smile ˜ Thank you, my dear precious & priceless, beautiful Michele ˜ I appreciate your kind visit & tis nice to be kisssed in the warmth of anothers lips * Love, John!:) ˜
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 8:07:00 AM

    Smile ˜ You know someday your bound to leave her but for now your going to stay, in the year of the cat * Tis very nice beautiful Michelle, to awaken everyday wrapped within the joyful arms of love ˜ Takes away the gray and shades the pangs and brings, smiles in colours unto ones heart ˜ Long live love, Always, John!:) ˜

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