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The Shot

Sweat bearing down his forehead,
like pearl beads rolling down the glistened surface.
He sees the enemy racing down - 
their goal is to stop his
Left, then right, then left once more
Slight slipping and sliding in an effort
to free himself, to position himself 
for his one purpose.
An open seam, he finds, and up he goes
Arms cock back like a gunman preparing 
to fire his final bullet.
Up, up, up and swish. Goes the ball, victory.


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  1. Date: 6/16/2011 1:30:00 PM

    Creative and interesting expressions, faizan
  1. Date: 6/16/2011 9:29:00 AM

    My apologies for printing your name incorrectly Faizan. June
  1. Date: 6/16/2011 9:25:00 AM

    Hi Faizamn-I like this cleverly written poem I found it a pleasure to read and look forward to more.I love how you write and am glad you joined SOUP so that you can continue to share your talents with the rest of us.Thank you. In friendship- love (sylvia) known as June
  1. Date: 6/16/2011 5:41:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Faizan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
  1. Date: 6/16/2011 4:56:00 AM

    go mavs and grats on your cool poem *luv skat
  1. Date: 6/16/2011 4:51:00 AM

    nicely penned. cory

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