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Just Below Your Lips



Just below your lips
all my desires curled up now
whispering love talks
to a single beauty spot
tonight my world starts from here





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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 4:50:00 PM

    Interesting work that you have presented to us in this one..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visit to my work and the consoling words on Gail's blog..Your compassion is appreciated..Sara
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 1:50:00 PM

    A world of beauty and romance in a few lines!
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:23:00 PM

    yeahhh, enticed by the mysteriously charming note you scribed so well, kashi... an A-1 piece over at rick's... :) huggs
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 1:06:00 AM

    Wonderfully romantic. I am gone less than 12 hours and I seem to have not even noticed this new tanka contest!!
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:52:00 PM

    This is an immensely wondrous and amazing write my friend! You have impressed me to no end by this fantastic, phenomenal poem here Kashi! I am enthralled by the splendor of this spectacular piece, what a delightful poem!
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 5:03:00 PM

    Another peek at your romantic heart. smile. BG
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 4:26:00 PM

    nice one, kash! i like it!
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 3:31:00 PM

    Adorable is the best word to describe this Kash, you made me smile, I like it, xxx

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