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Bring the Sky Nearer to me




Bring the sky nearer to me give me back the childhood days, so near to me that I can see a rainbow's kiss with sunrays! Give me back the childhood days those wonder eyes to see in sky, a rainbow's kiss with sunrays butterfly dreams free to fly! Those wonder eyes to see in sky a twilight's birth with morning dream, butterfly dreams free to fly like childhood dawn's first sun beam! A twilight's birth with morning dream so near to me that I can see, like childhood dawn's first sun beam bring the sky nearer to me! © kashinath karmakar ============000==============

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:37:00 AM

    yesss!.. sweet cheers on your win , kash... didn't ge to join this ; you are gold!..;)
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Congratulations, Kash, on this poem. I hope you finally reached the sky! RAY
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:39:00 AM

    I love this piece so much. Congrats on your brilliant win in the contest. AO
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 5:25:00 AM

    This is a lovely pantoum, Kash. An all so familiar nostalgia takes over the mind reading this poem. I see I have missed reading this and it already has won the top honors, big congrats on a well deserved win!
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:06:00 AM

    Beautiful arrangment. Love the whimsical images and elegant flow.
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 2:10:00 PM

    GORGEOUS!! Kash your poems are all incredible. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and luv, Gail
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 1:16:00 PM

    its abeautiful pantoum Dada and I see congratulations are in order..well, good to see your profile..finally you have unveiled your face..thank you for that.
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 5:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your top notch win. Remarkable and very charming.
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 6:55:00 PM

    This vividly brought back my own childhood days Kash...Great job and congrats - Tim
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 6:49:00 PM

    Congratulations... :-)
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 5:45:00 PM

    Hello Kash, very dreamy, plus more. Congratulations. xox~ Linda
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 9:49:00 AM

    Kash, how wonderful to see you here again with one of your best forms to write in, the pantoum. How ARE you? I miss seeing you every day like in the old times. Soupmail me sometime. Luv, Andrea
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 8:14:00 PM

    I love your butterfly dreams line Kash ..this is a beautiful poem all the way round....
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 4:24:00 PM

    oh my, i feel a natural grace in your words, kashi... the form, in which you've written these delicate lines, is enthralling...each stanza is a poem within itself... yessss!..:) huggs
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 11:39:00 AM

    Such a beauty this is........it touches that sky, so near to you with blissful words!! :)
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 10:08:00 AM

    nicely penned Kash....best wishes
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 12:16:00 AM

    Kash...what imagery! What beauty! What serenity and joy this evokes! A 7 from me! Thanks for the breath of fresh air this morning.
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 12:16:00 AM

    Ooooopppps....forget to hit that seven!
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 11:40:00 PM

    I am in awe of your ability to write so well...Seren
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 9:03:00 PM

    Wow, this is an excellent a masterfully written poem my friend! Kashi. I am so impressed with your write, it's been too long since I've read one of your awesome Pantoums, quite awesome indeed! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!

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