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Arrival

far too young
was I
to see
the arrival 
of the night.
the coming
of the machines,
the sun first sinking
behind the smokestacks
the skyline
swallowing the clouds

yet alone
in the yawning spaces
between the powerlines
and the oaks
i can still hear
a funerary song,
those elegiac cries,
the call of a sparrow,
before it dies.

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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 12:45:00 PM

    Very nice poem... I like it very much... Terry
  1. Date: 6/9/2012 6:18:00 PM

    great write,sad journey
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 7:47:00 PM

    sad poem......mother earth and her wonderful creatures slowly wilting and losing life every day that we disrespect the gifts she offers.....great message and awesome choice of words throughout to tell the story very poetically :)
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 7:10:00 PM

    Very interesting. I like it.
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 4:46:00 PM

    artfully done.
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 3:32:00 PM

    beautifully written
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:54:00 AM

    Nicely, penned! I like the wording, good write!
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:45:00 AM

    Wow, such images you have written. Good poem.

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