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A Mother's Thorn

A thorn in a mothers heart,
When did this pain start?
With twists and moans as the baby parts,
Certainly where it gets its start.
Heart tightens to the thorn with vines,
Tiny thing will always be mine.
Sucking and feeding off every beat,
The little thorn must always eat.
Feeling comfort and wanting to stay,
The little thorn feels the vines pull away.
Growing and always wanting more,
The little thorn starts to find locked doors.
Looking deeply to find one ajar,
A door opens and takes the thorn far.
Journeying to discover what it is,
The thorn learns it can never be kissed.
Wondering why it is such a thing,
It starts to feel its little sting.
Red secretions pulse from the thorn,
This is the day it learns to mourn.

Copyright © Cary Garavaglia | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 6/20/2016 11:27:00 PM

Cary, Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words. Keep sharing and writing poetry. ~SKAT~
Date: 1/2/2010 2:11:00 PM

Dear Cary, thank you for sharing this heart-felt poetry. Lainie
Date: 12/31/2009 2:53:00 PM

OMG this brought tears it was so heartfelt.You gotta keep writing a lot of real writers don't use their heart you do.Keep writing.Congrats on being featured.Teresa
Date: 12/29/2009 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Cary. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Date: 12/28/2009 3:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
Date: 12/27/2009 5:03:00 PM

very evocative and provocative! Light & Love
Date: 12/27/2009 9:54:00 AM

Cary~ Congratulations on your great featured poem! Laura :0)
Date: 12/22/2009 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Cary. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Date: 12/21/2009 8:55:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
Date: 12/20/2009 10:08:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
Date: 12/6/2009 11:35:00 PM

Very descriptive poetry Cary.Rgds Brian Thanks for your welcome comments today.
Date: 12/6/2009 3:47:00 PM

Thought provoking poem. Interesting use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. I hope you will post more poetry here at the soup. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
Date: 12/3/2009 12:25:00 PM

Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Date: 12/1/2009 12:00:00 PM

I think the hardest part of being a parent is letting our children grow up and away ... smile ... wonderful write you've done here, Cary and a very well-deserved poem to be featured this week at the Soup! Congratulations !!
Date: 12/1/2009 4:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Cary. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Date: 11/30/2009 1:44:00 PM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured Gary >> James
Date: 11/30/2009 6:15:00 AM

Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Date: 11/29/2009 2:43:00 PM

The pain comes through your words in a creative way. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Date: 7/8/2009 8:28:00 AM

I'm like the way you use metaphors in this poem!
Date: 7/4/2009 1:51:00 PM

Awesome job on this realistic poem! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
Date: 6/29/2009 3:50:00 PM

GREAT USEAGE of PERSONIFiCATION THIS POEM IS GOOD. THANX FOR THE COMMENT SO I HAD TO RETURN THE LOVE
Date: 6/29/2009 10:46:00 AM

Nicely written poem Cary>>James
Date: 6/29/2009 6:56:00 AM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Cary. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol

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