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Song of the Lost (Rewrite #2 2009)

I saw
a wintry song bout us all.
The minstrel had brought a package
of cold new Eden
The crowd hovered, 
as statues to the heathen.

Sounds poured,
 thoughts raced to the wind. 
When silence passed
 the minstrel would begin.

The vibration of string began 
with a note in the hand 
Listen! The simple song of hope
the hope of dreams
sounds so pure 
from such simple strings
 wrought with pain and cure.

Tasted were salts of sound 
Each bent, to benefit our need.
blank stares streamed,
with tears that were broken 
Each touch of coldness, and thought of regret 
formed dreams that only men can forget

From deep Edens verse emptiness now poured
filling every space of every chord.
Notes meant to harm not heal   
Now caressed my soul
Sounds of cold rhythms swarming 
so dark  I dared not look away 
lest my life lose its meaning there on that day.

In the end as falling into a pit
my heart soared, to escape the madness of it
I now burdened by song
stood at the end of all hope  
then as if seeing our pain and tears
knowing of our fears
In anticipations silence he did bow,
and with one final note
my darkened mood enshroud.

Copyright © Brian Hebisen | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 6/18/2016 9:36:00 AM

Brian, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**
Date: 2/5/2009 5:25:00 AM

There is a lot of great imagery in this. the poem itself stands as a great image. The structur of it is wonderful with a real thought-out approach. i wondered if it shoul;d have been 'about' in the second line but i think the ambiguity works well if the wintry song is a contest ( that being a subject for an opera by Wagner). The sounds of word in this fir the mood very well and there is a touch of pastiche (Elisabethan poetry?) particularlt with the final line.

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