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Fictitious Line

Smokes
of cigarettes
and mugs
full of coffee,
next
to the fictitious line
where the eddy
of words
leans against
and nods,
wounded,
to my silence.

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/18/2016 1:40:00 AM LOVE IT
Skat A Date: 11/30/2015 12:26:00 PM awesome
Judy Konos Date: 5/28/2013 8:40:00 AM Excellent
Breana Wiggins Date: 12/26/2008 10:41:00 PM Nice write.... Breana*
Denis Joe Date: 12/21/2008 3:04:00 AM This creates a great imagery. It works, on one level, as a photograph and as another as a painting. The words capture the colours well and there is nothing that drowns out the moment. My only doubt is the use of 'my' in the final line. I don't think that the flow of the poem would be unsettled if that syllable was removed and I think that it would be a good summary of the narrative if the line read to silence' instead. I might be wrong though!
Michaela Payne Date: 12/20/2008 8:28:00 PM Great write, very interesting use of words, I liked this. Welcome to the soup! Keep it up! blessings, ~Michaela~

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