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Victory in the valley


I've slain the giant bunny
with its bones, I'll build my bed
with its soft brown fur, 
I'll make a hat to warm
my giant balding head
I'll fry its legs and liver
I'll spread its heart on toast
and with its brains, I'll make a soup  
that's the part I like the most

Copyright © Tidy Desk | Year Posted 2024

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Date: 4/4/2024 7:39:00 PM

Ha ha! Very funny. I'm very much into rhyming poetry. Can I be cheeky enough to suggest that the rhythm, which is almost perfect, would be perfect with the removal of the word giant. That word interrupts the flow. I'm not trying to be critical. It's just a suggestion. I do like the poem. Wazza
Date: 3/31/2024 12:57:00 PM

Very well written enjoyed reading your work here.

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