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Flinch
underminded
gone with a breath
words unspoken
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 5/17/2013 11:14:00 PM
How are you Carol? We all are waiting for you to be here in your usual flying colors my friend. Love and good wishes ..Ravindra K
Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/12/2013 9:04:00 PM
Sad but said beautifully. Lovely thought. Enjoyed. Tfs
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/9/2013 10:15:00 AM
stopping by to say hi. Hope you are ok, dear.
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/9/2013 9:54:00 AM
Just want to say I am missing you my friend. love phyl
Mark Norton
Date: 4/29/2013 10:38:00 PM
to carol... a short poem that takes the mind down roads of mysterious thought, i hope whatever has left returns. love from mark
Carrie Richards
Date: 4/25/2013 2:07:00 PM
This has such a sad tone to it........I hope it does not reflect on what is happening in your life. PS...a big thanks for your last challenging contest Carol....an honor to be placed with all the wonderful poems! Best Wishes.!!
bl devnath
Date: 4/25/2013 11:13:00 AM
It's very sad, my friend. Missing a lot of new poems. Thanks, loved always, bl
Leonora Galinta
Date: 4/24/2013 11:48:00 AM
A beautifully sad poem which I'm delighted to read again tonight my dearest Carol. Well, thank you so much again for sharing and also for the great honor in my awesome win. Thank you and thank you so much for liking my poem. Have a great day & God bless you always! Missing you, Leonora
Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2013 4:15:00 PM
Betrayl is sad..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I am delighted that you enjoyed reading it..Sara
Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 4/22/2013 7:27:00 PM
Awesome title that sums of these words perfectly....excellent my dear! Hugs
Tim Ryerson
Date: 4/22/2013 6:53:00 AM
Good morning Carol...Much insight and wisdom displayed in this senryu..VERY belated happy birthday wishes too! - Tim
Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/18/2013 1:09:00 AM
Awesome, and a late happy birthday to you ;}
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 4/17/2013 12:56:00 PM
Hello Carol. Heard you had another special day recently so Happy Birthday to you. Hope you had an awesome day. love phyl
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/15/2013 7:44:00 PM
hola... Carol... stopping by to wish you a happy birthday... lol... I know it is not your birthday... oh well.. stopping by anyways. luv luv~ PD
Jancarl Campi
Date: 4/5/2013 5:29:00 AM
Hmmm, I like this one.
Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 4/4/2013 7:51:00 AM
How are you Carol. Hope to read you soon. Love and best wishes...Ravindra
Leonora Galinta
Date: 3/30/2013 8:57:00 PM
This is a beautifully sad poem my very dear Carol. I've enjoyed the read this morning. A great write indeed! I'm so sorry for the late visit; but' you're also in my thoughts and in my prayers and I'm missing you here. I'm stopping by to greet you as I give you my biggest, warmest and sweetest hugs with a happy and blessed Easter Season to you and your love ones! May God bless you always! love lots, Leonora
... Gigno
Date: 3/26/2013 10:29:00 PM
!!!
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/25/2013 6:06:00 PM
Carol I am so missing you here on the soup. HG and I were talking how we miss your comments and how you helped us when we were new on the soup. I hope all is well with you. Think of you often. love phyl
Mehrdad Bastanipoor
Date: 3/24/2013 11:04:00 PM
I Wish I Know whats that pathe between my heart and your eyes.
Rick Zablocki
Date: 3/21/2013 8:37:00 AM
Carol, very heartfelt, so amazing from so little. A great writer you are. Namaste. Rick
James Peranteau
Date: 3/8/2013 11:41:00 AM
Your title and write are like the icing on the cake dear poet ! A fantastic terse write which will be remembered for all time by me, that's for sure ! This write hits its mark; there are those of us who all to well know. Have a great week Carol....much love, james
Denis Brezik
Date: 3/7/2013 11:54:00 PM
YEA BAD BREATH
Denis Brezik
Date: 3/7/2013 11:45:00 PM
this is fucked up
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/7/2013 6:45:00 AM
Carol, I am glad to see you back here. This is very good, and I think it is about something that deeply affected you, making it all the more special. From your heart!
harry horsman
Date: 3/5/2013 3:33:00 PM
this is very powerful, Carol,, you are indeed missed i can assure you...
Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/3/2013 6:43:00 PM
nice to see this ;} you have a blessed day Carol ;}
Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/3/2013 5:36:00 PM
Carol; the words you wrote one day are the ones we won't forget. Please, please come back. I pray for you. Lucilla
Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 3/3/2013 8:40:00 AM
Words may come and go but the memories of motivating impressions left on the sands of time and on the hearts of your friends don't go so easily. We all really miss you my friend and shall be delighted to read more and more of your wonderful poetry. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra.....Carol Sunshine Brown
Debra Squyres
Date: 2/23/2013 10:01:00 AM
I really like this...feel it too !! But what comes after the flinch... we await !! Missed Sunshine/on poems wither/ come back soon !! the heart of a poet must speak/ words unwritten. Sunshine on poetrysoup/ Carol Brown... Hugssss !!!
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