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Dust Bunnies

Some places exist which folks need to clean,
like deep in a closet or under a bed.
Such spots get ignored because they’re unseen.
Those in plain view get attention instead!

Some children exist we choose to ignore,
for they are not ours. They live out of sight.
Unwanted, unloved, and rarely cared for;
some rich, others poor - they share the same plight.

Their life is a darkness where they’ve been thrown.
They are gathering dust; no voice have they.
Their sorrows are only to God fully known -
these dust bunnies, growing more filthy each day.

They are the future, and in a short time
they will have become society’s grime.


For the Gathering Dust poetry Contest of John Lawless

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  1. Date: 2/28/2015 9:06:00 PM

    Sad but true...very nicely penned Andrea
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 8:35:00 PM

    So true Andrea, and the whole world turns their back on them. Then when some of them turn to crime, we blame them.. Enjoyed your poem,my friend. Hope it is a win for you....Peter
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 7:53:00 PM

    Much anguish here . . . seeing the cycle but feeling helpless to make changes . . . but awareness is a beginning . . . not more money, more programs, more stuff . . . but love and attention. Well done my dearest friend. . . deep is your love for children which is part of your calling each day!! Much love and light. 7
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 5:21:00 PM

    Creative work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..My dust has been there so long it has become not a bunny but a full grown kangaroo..Thanks for the visitst..Sara
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 11:10:00 AM

    fantastic sonnet Andrea John will love this gl in contest hugs
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 10:58:00 AM

    Great comparison Andrea...I used to see it all the time when I coached the younger kids in baseball then softball...Many of the parents where behind their kids 100% but others would just drop them off at practices or games...come pick them up late...it is very disheartening...I tried to give them a little extra attention...joke around...make it a fun experience...we never know what is going on at home
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 10:31:00 AM

    wow, andrea! this poem went to a place i didn't expect from the beginning but you've made the connection quite brilliantly! great poem...
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 9:04:00 AM

    Wow! Powerful! Great message. Thank God there are people who make it their mission to search out these dust bunnies.
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 8:13:00 AM

    Nice write Andrea with a great message, good luck in the contest as always.
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 7:02:00 AM

    Clever and moving Andrea.
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 6:47:00 AM

    You tell a sad tale in this work. You are so prolific! I will post something new soon. Off to ESL training this morning. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 5:48:00 AM

    Fantastic write, Andrea. What a unique take on the theme...what a worthy subject matter. Good luck. Hugs
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 1:43:00 AM

    A brilliant take on the theme Andrea - the powerful second stanza and the final couplet really hit home - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 1:20:00 AM

    An honest confesdion of evils present in society....great too..lol amolkumar
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 12:03:00 AM

    This is very good message Andrea. Thanks for sharing #7

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