Alcohol Poems | Examples

Premium Member Rules of the Game

Rules of the Game

Before you open the bottle
You need to lay down the rules
What’s in and out of bounds
But don’t spend too much time
Because once the game starts
There are no rules
And that’s why we love to play.

(9/8/25)

Cost - Benefit

Does it consume my time? Sure.
My money? Of course.
My health? Probably.
My ability to think? Naturally.
Is there great risk in it? If you're not careful ...
but of course you'll be careful
even if it makes you less so by nature ...

So why?
Why flirt with disaster? What's to be gained?

Escape.

Relatively inexpensive; perfectly legal; sometimes quite celebrated.
Christ said not to worry, didn't He?
Well - here's how, you nervous, fearful fool!

And the sweet icing atop the cake - 
you ease up on the reins.
You lose the mental strength 
to rein in your appetites. 
So you'll get your escape - and the sickly sweet thrill
of knowing that your most selfish, raw desires could gain control
and do what your right mind would be far too shamed to endorse
in the Light.


24 August 2025
finished last few lines by 8:31 AM; started the poem some days prior.

Premium Member Breaking free from reality

Tipsy when under the influence
world closes in for a private party
~ the illusion of escape brief



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025


Premium Member Taming the Alcoholic

When cage is cask,
And whip is knife,
Blood's to flask,
As wrist's to life. 

For every sip,
There's but cage and whip.
Tis better to skip,
And equip your grip.

Premium Member Alcohol

That clean crisp bubbly taste. 
That clean crisp bubbly taste I crave. 
That taste just one more sip, one more sip to drown out the noise, one more sip to forget about everything. 
One turns into two, two turns into six, God knows it goes down easier than water.  
I used to be able to hold so much more, or at least it seemed that way. I just want to relax, to stop the stress just for a minute. But next thing I know, my lips become loose and words that were hard to share now start to flow without any effort. 
Eyes no longer bright white around my irises, now bloodshot. 
Stumbling over my words, thoughts hazy, tripping over myself and my head becoming scatterbrained. 

Just one more drink. 
Just one more drink to keep my emotions at bay. 

That taste of clean crisp bubbly sedative. 
Just one more drink.

Letter to Alcohol

LETTER TO ALCOHOL 

Ingested poison
Ingested pain
Ingested hurt
Constant rain
Consumptions of an illusion, 
Bruised, Bitter, and Broken.
Ingested false realities and Trumas never spoken
Secrets within the eyes hidden behind a smile
Ingested loss of self gone for miles and miles and miles

I allowed you Jack to plot with Daniel 
Jose to lead me astray 
And Johnny to walk me down a path that led to a permanent grave

But now the Death of a spirit has gracefully been reclaimed from what you once shattered and broken and held with liquid chains 

So Goodbye to your wicked lies

so long to the days I've carved 

You flowing through my veins that made me an addictive slave.


Premium Member Some Where - Apr 12

Toppled by a bottle, collapsed upon
her painful past, asleep—but well awake!—,
unmoving, but for her mind stirred aquake,
the girl is yawning before her black dawn.

Alone, couched by a burning blanket drawn
over a conscience guilty at the stake,
slipping into the sly hands of the snake,
she sees not clearly the sickening con

which lures her slowly to her deathly state.
Unknowingly, she’s dozing, edging deeper
into the dreamrealm, into the hazy
murk of the promised land. 
					Her name was Daisy—
until, unexpected, said the reaper,
“Poor thing… if only you could now change fate.”

Premium Member Say No To Substances

When you partake of substances, the light grows dim/
A spark once divine, now lost within/
The mind, once sharp, begins to fade/
A prisoner of choices poorly made/
Chaos reigns, where order stood/
A life derailed, misunderstood/
The buzz, the high, a fleeting flight/
Leaves only shadows in the night/
Men deceive, diseases spread/
You will wake up not knowing how you got pregnant/
Regretful mornings, words unsaid/
A stolen future, a fractured soul/
A body poisoned, far from whole/
But say no and let your light ignite/
A beacon burning, pure and bright/
For God has crafted you with care/
A temple strong, beyond compare/
Choose the path where wisdom leads/
Plant the seeds of noble deeds/
Say no to drugs and alcohol, stand and fight/
And let your soul reclaim its light/

Premium Member detox

self disgust 
and disappointment
for the slip-up
but I need to know
what cheapens intimacy
devaluing myself
devalues anyone 
with whom I 
would share something 
valuable
it's why 
I'm detoxing from 
all these dopamine pumps
and anesthestics 
(gambling and alcohol)
how could online "intimacy" 
not be included in
the mix that
keeps me from 
feeling
all must go
until this backlog
can be managed

Premium Member Recluse

‘I’m a failed Muslim. 
I drink raki now,’ he says. 
A bottle twinkles 
on the upturned orange box. 
 
On the unmade bed, 
a punch-drunk pillow 
lurches in a sea of ruptured quilts. 
 
‘I never pray,’ he adds, 
as hawk-eyed Ataturk 
retreats to an ascetic frame 
and glowers at the room. 
 
And we who are too precious 
to confess our faults 
feel awkward in the silence. 


Turkey, 1990


First published in Blue Minaret

Premium Member ALCOHOL IS IN OUR GENES

It would seem that our early ancestors 
Foraged afar to find the freshest fruit   
But sometimes they would have to eat windfalls 
That were covered with that white fungal fur  
Which made the windfall fruit start to ferment  
And making alcohol from the sugars. 

Was this fermented fruit more popular, 
Perhaps providing them with much pleasure? 
Did fermented fruit become preferred food? 
Maybe over many millions of years  
Our human genes then slowly did evolve 
So we take to consuming alcohol.

Downtown

• He should've been back by now
• "Where did he go?" you ask
• "Downtown in the straw market," I replied
• "He tends to carry a flask"

Premium Member Immolation: Words From the Second

Both selves have fallen, to the drink at last,
A time to forge the third, and split anew.
The first: Too funny, fleeting dreams have passed,
Too light for purpose, upside-down yet true.

Beloved by all but self—so lost, so sweet,
Its hollow laughter echoed through the night.
The second, cold with empire’s pallid beat,
Kept the professors' chickens up in fright.

The wine—transforming masks of elf and self,
A cruel trick, as one dissolved to two.
The world feigns wait, confused, upon a shelf,
Not knowing which of these it wishes true.

Yet seasons change, and with them comes the call:
To walk as one, or split, to rise from fall.

Exquisite Darts

Cleverness in chaos.
Twisted mischief threads
beneath razor intellect.

Urban antiquity,
out of place,
sherry to eyelash to eye.

Her cigarettes go better
with beer wisdom and
starry sky humidity.

Grand Dame, ferocious girl.
Lead me up a garden path that
stings until 5am on barren streets.

Vampiric. Languid.
There is no elegant sufficiency,
no want contained.

Faded lilies.
Threadbare wisdom swings
to giggling gallows below, aloft.

One more drink?
Reckless friend, take my hand
and drag me sweetly away.

Premium Member Wounded By Alcohol

Whom of you have never felt the pinch and pain 
when inebriated thoughts begin to fall like rain 
whom of you have ever poured it down the drain 
when a loved one says, " this is insane" 

Whom of you have peeled the mask of hidden truth 
pushed beyond the shove and talked about your youth ?
Whom of you, worn down by life whipped the scourge   
sobered up and restrained the urge...

Whom of you at a ripe old age still cry for your mother 
when times get tough, do you have a sister or a brother 
Whom of you  faced and stoned don't give a damn 
when a child cries out like an angry ram ...

Whom of you have ever been perfect before you were broken 
when the hourglass of time says enough/here take this token
Whom of you grasped it with two shaking hands and said yes 
I'm gonna rise up and be counted for I have made such a mess. 

Whom of you like me still cry for the love that refuses to die,   
when the stars of heaven split open their light, do you cry ?

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