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Yuck--But I Love the Kid

It seems at least one dorm room is the dwelling of a bum. I visited my son and saw big piles of grungy clothes. leftover fast food, open garbage--things a mother loathes! Sloppy sons so seldom seek to scour sickening scum.

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 12/23/2015 2:29:00 AM

Hahahaha. Your poem reminds me when I was in high school. Congrats for your WIN Janice! ;-)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/23/2015 8:14:00 AM

Thanks, Teddy. I'm glad you liked it! Janice

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 2:12:00 AM

Brilliant take Janice n a great win.. big congrats!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/22/2015 8:36:00 AM

Thanks so much, Upma. Merry Christmas! Janice

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2015 9:41:00 AM

The topic might be Yuck, Janice, but the content of this entry is capably done:) A worthy winner it is...congratulations:) // paul

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/21/2015 11:35:00 AM

Paul, thank you SO much for your kind words! Janice

Michael Tor

Date: 12/21/2015 7:12:00 AM

Loved this Janice! Congratulations on this win!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/21/2015 8:44:00 AM

Thank you, Michael. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2015 7:36:00 PM

this one was VERY good. Congrats. It was written very cleverly.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/20/2015 7:53:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Yours was great! Janice

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 4:53:00 PM

janice, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/20/2015 7:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda. Janice

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:41:00 AM

JANICE, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/20/2015 1:10:00 PM

Thank so much, SKAT! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2015 3:47:00 PM

this set is EXCELLENT. I see a big win in its future!!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/18/2015 3:51:00 PM

I hope so! Thanks, Andrea. Janice