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You're such a lovely cyclone

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You're such a lovely cyclone

Hey girl!
I love the way you whirl, 
and swirl,
so deep inside my heart.
you're such a lovely cyclone as you tear my mind apart.
seething lava in my veins,
tsunami in my breast,
a hurricane that's gone insane,
an earthquake that won't rest.
your tremors how they move me,
I simply can't resist,
so I sprout wings, sweet golden things,
and fly into your kiss.

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  1. Date: 4/24/2011 1:28:00 PM
    jean ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 12:12:00 PM
    Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 11:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jean-Pierre. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 4:16:00 AM
    A Cyclone Attraction! Nice! Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jean Pierre. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 12:15:00 PM
    A heart touching, beauty, Jean-Piere. Congratulations on being featured this week on Soup. Annalise

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 12:04:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Jean-Pierre

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 9:26:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 6:31:00 AM
    this is nice! I like the way you led us to the kiss. I like the metaphors with the tsunami, earthquake, & hurricane. reading this made me feel light on the surface.

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 9:09:00 AM
    I like your weather! This was really fun to read.