You Where Here Today

After a year  of running                                                                                                                                          I knew it would soon be over                                                                                                        And then suddenly it was                                                                                                                        The light left your eyes and you where gone                                                                                              I sat  alone for the first time in forty years                                                                              Wondering What it was going to be like without you                                                                    Then suddenly today four years latter I felt you smile at me                                                                               I mean I know with all my mind and all my heart and all my soul                                                          That you where here today
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:46:00 PM
I believe our loved ones are with us and even if we cannot see them they still are with us for all time. Nicely done on this poem. love phyl
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Date: 4/4/2013 7:07:00 PM
Hi Michael, I like this feeling. I think this warm notion is good feeling when our loved ones are gone. I think what you are saying is,,, "we should live with the pleasure of knowing "that you where here today." and waiting for us on the tomorrow. Somehow I wish to accept like you have. But, knowing my sweet little grandson is somewhere smiling at us.. puts my mind on a little ease. Adding and keeping this poem as favorite. I'll never know when I need the ending uplifting image. God bless~Linda
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Date: 4/4/2013 10:09:00 AM
Hello Michael, This is a very lovely and touching poem from one's heart..It never leaves Michael but time has a way of helping us through towards our next jouney. Smiles....
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Date: 4/4/2013 8:59:00 AM
Michael; loneliness is not easy. It is hard, but we learn to live with it. I once wrote a poem - Life Without You. It is not here maybe I'll poste it one day. I do believe that our loved ones do come to visit us and they also look out for us. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Date: 4/4/2013 3:39:00 AM
just lovely
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