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My Dad - 1930

"You showed me the courage and strength to achieve all things- I hope you are proud." by Poet A simple man was he, one child of ten, who lived and worked the farm with family. But stardust fell on him- time and again he hid away to read his books to see what life could offer him and he'd give back, if he would leave the farm to chase his star with talents that would keep his dreams on track. And so he left to raise his future’s bar. Concerned for family and what he’d done- one son of three now gone, and only two remained to work the land beneath the sun; but still, he followed stardust trails anew. No school beyond eighth grade, he still pursued production of the tube-based radio, in nineteen-thirty, when its parts were crude yet intricate- and he became a pro. The stardust led him to a higher plane whereby in time he owned a factory; employed so many workers who would gain good living in a time of poverty. Oh, Dad, you hushed the stars- you did not fail. With inner strength, you followed their bright glow, to choose this path, that led you to prevail and help so many people live and grow. This gift of courage you have offered me to follow and make use of dreams to share; to let our stardust paths lead on to free the will to seek the best on our life’s stair. February 22, 2015 ~2nd Place~ Contest: A Meaningful Poem Sponsor: Constance La France Judged: 03/27/2021 ~2nd Place~ Premiere Contest: 2019 Marathon Mile #23 Sponsor: Mark Toney Judged: 03/13/2019 ~1st Place~ Contest: Favorite Rhyming Poem Ever Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 02/28/2018 ~1st Place~ Contest: Tell Us About Your Dad Sponsor: Judy Konos Judged:01/05/2016

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Date: 3/27/2021 5:05:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my challenge, A Meaning Poem, and that is exactly what you gave me, your poem touched my heart, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/13/2019 3:42:00 PM
Precious tribute to your dad. Congrats on your placement! Poetic hugs, Juliet.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/15/2019 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Juliet, for your visit, congrats, and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/13/2019 1:42:00 PM
Sandra, wonderful tribute to your father! Congratulations on your second-place win on Mile 23 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Only 4 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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Date: 3/15/2019 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mark. I am so honored to be on your winner's list again, especially with this special poem of mine. Hard to believe only 4 contests left! Looking forward to the next. Sandra
Date: 3/13/2019 1:32:00 PM
Back with more congrats on your much deserved podium finish, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/15/2019 10:25:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/2/2018 7:37:00 PM
What a beautiful tribute. Congrats on your well deserved win, Sandra.
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Date: 2/28/2018 8:18:00 PM
Oh Sandra, such a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your 'stardusted' and admirable dad. A lovely poem about a talented man expressed so lovingly. Congratulations on your win! Warmest wishes and hugs my friend.. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/1/2018 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Yes, he was the best Dad ever. I so much appreciate your lovely comments and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/28/2018 6:09:00 PM
Sandra, what a wonderful tribute... congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for your lovely comment and congrats. I was pleased to let people again read about him. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/28/2018 11:08:00 AM
he sounded like a wonderful man sweet Sandra...thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:12:00 PM
Yes, Laura, he was the best. Thank you so much for letting us showcase some older poems and for my wonderful placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 6/3/2016 7:08:00 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/29/2016 4:14:00 PM
What a wonderful father you had Sandra. I think he would be delighted with your lovely touching tribute to him. Congratulations on your well deserved top placement! What a dashing figure of a man he was too. Is he still living? #7 ; )
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:00:00 PM
Hi, Connie. Thank you so much for your nice visit, uplifting comment, congrats, and 7 rating! Yes, he was handsome, and I wish he were still here but passed away in 1985. I still miss him, and Mom too. I am so pleased you enjoyed my tribute to him. Thanks again. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/29/2016 11:53:00 AM
A lovely well written poem
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Date: 5/29/2016 7:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Shirley. Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 7:11:00 PM
A lovely daddy you had and a lovely poem about him. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joyce! Yes, he was a wonderful Dad. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 2:38:00 PM
Wonderful win... Linda
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 11:54:00 AM
Your ever constant talent shines through once more in this emotional, loving and heartfelt tribute. I am touched. Congrats on your deserved win ... CayCay
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, CayCay, for your uplifting and supportive comments and congrats. I appreciate it very much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 9:55:00 AM
Well done Sandra, congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thank you very much, John, for your visit and congrats! Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 9:26:00 AM
Sandra, I love the title, you made the Star hush! This is such a touching write your heart just pour out your feelings!!!! A fav. congratulations on your win!!!!!
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve. He was so special and I still miss him so much. I appreciate your nice comments and fav! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 9:01:00 AM
Such a strong and determined man,you've described him beautifully Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2016 10:05:00 AM
Thank you, Sara....yes he was. I am having problems with my comments...they have jumped and I can't fix it! Anyway, thank you! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:00:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments. Sandra
Date: 5/28/2016 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra, well deserved honor...
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Date: 5/28/2016 9:55:00 AM
Thank you very much, Charlie. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments. Sandra
Date: 1/13/2016 1:02:00 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2016 10:56:00 AM
Your dad was very handsome. Congrats and thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/10/2016 8:29:00 PM
Hi Richard, so nice of you to stop by and read my poem. Thank you...yes he was handsome and a wonderful dad, for sure. Miss him...Thanks for your nice comment and congrats. And, all the best to you and yours for the new year! Sandra
Date: 1/6/2016 12:04:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/7/2016 4:41:00 PM
Hi Skat, thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/6/2016 6:09:00 AM
You have done him proud.
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:42:00 PM
Hi Howard, thank you for visiting my poem and for your nice comment. He was so special. Sandra
Date: 1/5/2016 9:08:00 PM
You are right to be proud of your dad. Congratulations on your poem. Love, Joyce
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/7/2016 4:42:00 PM
Hi Joyce, so nice of your to visit my poem. Thank you for your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/5/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. "You made the Stars hush"...Your dad sounds wonderful and managed to own his own business how fantastic....know you are super proud of him! I sure am!
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Date: 1/5/2016 5:02:00 PM
Another nice contest, Judy. I was pleased to bring this poem forward again in honor of my dad. So nice that everyone received a nice placement for writing about their dad. Thanks! Hugs, Sandra
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