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You Asked Me What I Am Doing

You asked me what I’m doing Sitting in this warm summer wind; Late in the night beneath the moon light Hoping I’ll see you again. After all these years of wondering Whatever became of our dreams? When we were so young and climbing the rungs Of living beyond our means. Criticizing, antagonizing Each other day by day; What became of the love that burned like flames And ashes, we threw it all away. As time took its toll as we both grew old And traveled to opposite ends; You took to high mountains and I to low rivers Swearing never to return again. To that place we once stood together Promising ‘til death do we part; Until we shredded that vow and swore somehow Never ever make a new start. Now you ask me what I’m doing Sitting in this warm summer wind; Thinking of you and the love we once knew And does goodbye really mean the end?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/16/2011 6:16:00 AM
Wonderful poem. I wish this poem was about me, I never got that call, to date. Thanks for your comments too.
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:49:00 PM
If the flame isn't fed, the fire goes out. I know all about it and this makes it all so real again. Can't help feeling the sadness of life sometimes Terry. It isn't all it's cracked up to be and your poetic description of it all brings tears. Your verse says it in a way no one else could.
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:26:00 PM
sad thoughts....so many marriages given over to indifference and foolish pride. It is a struggle to meet in the middle. I get to feeling that my hubby.....well never mind. save it for another time.
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