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You Are Not Him

move me past these words stroke my face as you transport me on the tip of your tongue, directed, everywhere there is nothing but the fall to your arms, no softer arc to land, or port for this storm without you I am mindless, restless flesh, twitching an immitation at life, in the longing of this separation I have devolved to a whisper of darkness, and as I pick at the frayed threads of shadow I watch the stars, ever dim for I know you, are not him

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/11/2010 5:40:00 AM
such an excellent peace here ,thank you Jayne duncan
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:38:00 PM
I think of all the ones I read tonight, this one is the one i like best. I think you do really great with free verse, by the way. Love how you ended this one! andrea
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Date: 9/28/2010 12:42:00 AM
"frayed threads of shadow", very good. I liked it all. Charles
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:57:00 AM
a deep write, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:14:00 AM
Oh wow! Jayne..You must be new to PS! Deep, introspective piece. Goes to my favs! Welcome to Soup! I hope you enjoy your time here. Peace and love, Audrey
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