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Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow

YESTERDAY Tears dripping down as I watch my baby suffer in silence, for this afflicted disease has no understood known cure- I can handle family disputes, madness and worldly violence, but losing my precious baby girl I just cannot endure. Without my sweet Lily I’d lose everything secure. TODAY Tears shedding without control as I lay one pink carnation. I see her tired eyes closed laying in a casket made of gold- Why would God allow me to live through this situation? My only wish was to watch her sweet little life grow old... Say one last goodbye and let go of her hand that I hold. TOMORROW Tears will still be needing tissues as I remember her bitty hands, how will I ever forget that beauty mark on her right cheekbone? I had dreams of raising a baby with new and exciting plans, maybe I would have done something different, if only I’d known- Now her father and I are in the dry wilderness lost and alone. *Dedicated to my sweet niece* Date Written: July 25, 2016

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Date: 8/4/2016 8:50:00 AM
Very, very creative! Loved the descending letters, very dramatic effect. English Quintain must be difficult five lines stanzas, how to figure out rhyme scheme. Very emotional and creative. Congrats on shared win!
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Date: 7/31/2016 3:25:00 PM
Laura, very heartfelt poem good luck in the contest :-) Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/4/2016 10:51:00 AM
thank you lovely Eve! :)-luloo (sorry I just saw this comment lady)
Date: 7/26/2016 12:37:00 PM
Very heartfelt and I really hope this did not happen to you. I loss my baby girl at 19 years. No one can truly understand putting away your child.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/27/2016 10:28:00 AM
thank you very much Janis :)-luloo
Date: 7/26/2016 12:29:00 PM
Love the creativity of the quintain with the descending letters - such a sad poem LuLoo - I too have written about the loss of a child:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/27/2016 10:28:00 AM
thank you lady Jan :)-luloo

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