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Yeah... I Said It

Have you ever been on the train or bus take a sniff and sit with disgust? There's a bad feeling in your gut because you know you smell some butt All you think is someone move me cause I'm tired of smelling this ladies Coochie It's only a few stops, you can't loose your seat, but it's killing you smelling that man's feet You're nauceaus and there's sweat in your palms It's the tart smell of underarms Getting from here to there is a chore and just when you think you can't take no more, you talk to someone cause that's all that's left and the whole time you can see their breath I know that this may sound harsh so do us all a favor... PLEASE WASH!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/5/2010 3:33:00 PM
how stinky but so true some people just don't care well spoken loved it faleshia
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Date: 4/5/2010 11:39:00 AM
uhg reminds me of the gym everyone stinks but there's always this one guy that no one wants to work out near him XD
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