Wrongful Imprisonment: Fabricant Sonmi 4 5 1

"Our lives are not our own. We are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime and every kindness, we birth our future." - David Mitchell's character Sonmi 451 A slave was Somni 4 5 1 to corporate society. She worked long hours and had no fun. Denied to see the light of sun and engineered genetically, a slave was Somni 4 5 1 to corporate society. Of joy to come, she once had dreamed, but truth would set fair Somni free. Her fate was not what she had deemed; of joy to come, she once had dreamed until the light of knowledge gleamed on her! A martyr she would be. Of joy to come, she once had dreamed but truth would set fair Somni free. (oops, I thought I could do 16 lines, not under 14, so the first poem is not truly a triolet, but a shortened version of one.) Inspired by the 5th story inside the movie Cloud Atlas: An Orison of Sonmi~451 For the contest of Black Eyed Susan: Wrongful Imprisonment or Sentenced
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Date: 11/15/2012 2:48:00 PM
You know I saw that movie and all I remember is itt was hyped too much was totally inconsistant and had plot flaws up the yin-yang lol...PS don't see the new Bond it stunk???Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/14/2012 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2012 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend! Cheers! Thank you so much for stopping by and your inspiring congratulatory and wonderful comments! It is always appreciated! Just have my PC back. Have a nice day and take care! love always, Leonora
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Date: 11/11/2012 8:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win on this write. The kids lost their cat Mira today so it is sad at our house. soup mail
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Date: 11/11/2012 6:45:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your big win. I am unfamiliar with the movie I am sure you aren't. Great form. Thank you for keeping up the comments even though I have not been around to answer. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/11/2012 10:32:00 AM
Good morning, Andrea :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment or Sentenced " contest, deep subject... always~ PD
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:52:00 PM
CONGRATS ANDREA ON A FASCINATING WRITE AND ANOTHER TERRIFIC WIN LUV .. HOPE YOUR WEEKEND IS GOING GREAT ..SSOOOO COLD HERE ..MORE LIKE WINTER THAN FALL...BBBRRR
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Date: 11/10/2012 6:18:00 PM
congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 11/10/2012 10:46:00 AM
congratulations....Seren
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Date: 11/10/2012 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations friend Andrea for your winning poem. Cheers!!
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Date: 11/6/2012 8:17:00 PM
Girl; This is a great poem. really sad, but it's good. I wish you luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 11/6/2012 5:25:00 PM
I love your triolet. I have not yet been able to write one I like.
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Date: 11/6/2012 1:17:00 AM
Amazing and profound. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/5/2012 1:40:00 PM
Sounds like a profound movie. Will have to see it. A very sympathetic write from you Andrea.
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Date: 11/5/2012 10:37:00 AM
Excellent write Andrea. Thanks for sharing your poem. And thanks for your congrats on my win.
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Date: 11/4/2012 7:45:00 PM
Very good use of the form to write for this contest Andrea.Touching story.
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Date: 11/4/2012 1:05:00 PM
love this clever write, Andrea - I'm sure Susan will love it too
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Date: 11/4/2012 6:40:00 AM
Wow! I feel. Nice expression about wrongful imprisonment of Somni 4 5 1. Good luck wished. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/4/2012 4:54:00 AM
Excellent poem. I will now have to look up this character. I'm very intrigued. The poem is definitely winning material.
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Date: 11/4/2012 4:11:00 AM
Excellent. Very creative write. Well done. Tfs
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Date: 11/4/2012 12:26:00 AM
Two thumbs up my friend Andrea for this superb write of yours! I love it! So informative gem from you again! Winner for sure! All the best in the contest. love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 11/3/2012 9:34:00 PM
INTRIGUING POEM FOR THIS CONTEST ANDREA ..KNOW IT WILL BE A HUGE WINNER FOR ITS CONTENT LUV .. GOOD LUCK .. GREAT TO SEE NIKKO HAS RETURNED ..
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Date: 11/3/2012 7:28:00 PM
A superb write Andrea - real poetic. I admire your talent. Thanks for admiring my Haiku Patting my back. Try all the genres I have written to give me benefit of your observations. Sharing this Haiku on Poetrysoup has made so many hands pat my back. I am grateful. Love. -Mohammad
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Date: 11/3/2012 5:05:00 PM
Don't know about your explanation Andrea but the poem resonates with a sad futility. Life is not always pleasant I think.
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Date: 11/3/2012 4:38:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Glad that I stopped by to read this one..Sara
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